DOCSP-44435-clarify-compass-buttons #728
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Thanks for this update, @amalhotra-mdb! I've left two suggestions for your consideration.
Thanks!
Joe
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| Click :guilabel:`Save` or :guilabel:`Save & Connect` to navigate to the | |||
| |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`. | |||
| Click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect` | |||
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[suggestion]
Consider rephrasing as: "To navigate to the |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page `, click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect`."
| |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`. | ||
| Click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect` | ||
| to navigate to the |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`. | ||
| The :guilabel:`Save` button saves your connection and closes the modal without |
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[suggestion]
Consider bulleting these out for improved scannability.
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Thank you for these changes, @jmd-mongo ! Changes made, back to you! |
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Thanks for these changes, @amalhotra-mdb! This one LGTM at this point.
Thanks,
Joe
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Hi @lerouxb , could you take a look at this PR for an external review, when you get a chance? Thanks! |
DESCRIPTION
Clarify the difference bt the "save", "connect", and "save and connect" buttons when connecting to your cluster on Compass.
STAGING
https://deploy-preview-728--docs-compass.netlify.app/connect/#connect-to-your-cluster.
JIRA
https://jira.mongodb.org/browse/DOCSP-44435
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